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Are there many or were they avoided up to a notch
where the rite or rhythm takes us into corner still comfortable
where the visuals place us into what we want
where we don’t get but give birth only to change
some passage, the reward on our family wall
but this one has a noticeable spot of mold after the last,
really maybe only friend has died.

Was it your partner? Your wife of ten children or
the ones facial expression when stale
still accomplishes a pleasant evening
like the every weekend social
and the very all dear
who wouldn’t pull apart of tooth
that much as time can,
if not in check.

Only a moth open
Loves
As it sees,
Feels
Why?

Maybe to believe there is something else
that what we hold in tears, as life feeds.

Thourn Whaul '080313TW' rev: 080429



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