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Abstracts in a Summer (2006)

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       -I- (the painting in the painting)

Large bag and towel   
 just as I like
decided to walk down
with nothing but a cup,
 we laugh



       -II- (the painting)

Large sword to shoot held
  finger on blade next to handle
a large nose only
covers hidden bits
nudes one nose shaped
and the only face has
  uneven holes for eyes
a fine blade a perfect balance



      -III- (background)

Large rooms echo
  fly spray
balconies full with doves
drying air and smoke
   airs from outside
and beside as well
all is gentle

 


        -IV- (next to the sig.)

Large is the small world
  left to explore
it was like that once
yet it stayed rediscovered
  seeking cover

 

Thourn Whaul  '06



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